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Mystery

Ready, Fire, Aim and Fire Again

By Paul R. Lloyd

When the first shot rang out, I was parked on my linoleum-topped battleship gray desk in what passes for an office above the Black Dingus, the dive with the on again, off again neon sign and the chicken combo basket larger than an ocean liner including a potato farm supply of French fries and a gallon bucket of coleslaw – all on the cheap and easy.

Lieutenant Lawson was on the chesterfield in the lobby taking a snooze break from his latest caper involving a meter maid who collected almost as many quarters for herself as she did for the city.

Bertie was behind the reception desk reading Travis Thrasher’s horror novel about a writer and his ghosts. I’m planning to borrow it when Bertie finishes. Staying on top of horrors interests me both as a writer and private eye.

When the second shot rang out, Lawson snapped out of whatever crime scene haunted his dreams. “Wha’ happened?”

“Shots.” I threw his hat at him as the door squeaked open and I slid out to the hall. Bertie peaked over her Thrasher as I passed by, eyebrows raised.

“What kind of shots.” Lawson was still waking up.

“Not the flu kind.” I pushed open the door to the office across the way. The first bullet hole I spotted garnished the light green painted plasterboard behind the reception desk with a nice, clean puncture.

The second bullet hole was located in the midst of a blood stain plastered across the dark green sweater worn by the blond sitting at the reception desk. Her head was hanging over the back of her chair with a dropped jaw. Her arms hung straight down to the floor.

Lawson checked for a pulse. “Nothing.”

I looked around the office. Everything appeared neat and orderly except for the woman holding the smoking pistol and leaning against the doorway that led to an inner office.

“What happened?” Lawson asked.

The woman laughed hysterically. “Ready. Fire. Aim.”

“What’d she say?” Lawson asked.

Before I could answer, the woman chuckled and said, “And fire again.”

Lawson grabbed the weapon from the woman. “At least we know what happened.”

“Do we, Lawson?” I took the lady by the arm and led her into the inner office.

“What do you mean?” Lawson shrugged.

“Maybe we should talk to the other two in the inner office.”

“Not more suspects. She was holding the gun.” Lawson shook his head.

“Doesn’t make her guilty,” I said.

“Looks guilty enough to me,” Lawson said.

“Let’s take their statements and see what really happened.” I pulled a notepad out of my suit coat pocket.

The woman in the doorway shook her head. “Sorry. I’m the president of the company so it was a shock to me. I didn’t behave very well, did I?”

The man sitting at the natural-finish oak desk in the inner office said, “I’ve been here all the time with Shirley doing my job as the office manager. We didn’t do it.”

The third person in the office leaned an elbow on a tall filing cabinet. “Don’t listen to the vice president. Tomas is a liar.”

The woman was still in the doorway. “Don’t pay any attention to Marquarte over there by the filing cabinet. He’s a lying vice president. And a lousy shot who got lucky or unlucky depending on how you feel about poor Rosie our former receptionist.

“You Shirley?” Lawson asked.

“Yes,” the woman said and then fainted.

Lawson said, “Too bad. Thought we were getting somewhere.”

“We did, Lawson. The killer was…”

Whodunit?

MARQUARTE SHIRLEY TOMAS

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